Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Memory Moments from Hell's Blessing



Vietnam Central Highlands
April 1969

Their parachutes buried, the POW rescue team assembles at the edge of a clearing.
Dread of landing behind enemy lines becomes reality when:
The fog of war descends.
The Alamo.
Little Big Horn.
Armageddon.
A Yankee Go Home message from a Hanoi delegation.
A staccato of the AK-47s, and a grenade shower.

Twilight becomes noon.

Who said war is hell?
He's right.

War IS Hell.
  
***


In awe of the opulence, Masterson blurts out, “Wow,” in admiration of the many fragrant flowering plants all around the entranceway, art masterpieces on the walls, and pointedly, at a clone of Michelangelo’s David in the middle of the main room to the left of the stairway.


There’s money.
There are riches.
There’s wealth
Then there is a citizen’s version of Ft. Knox
  
***


Jessica smiles provocatively, gives each of them their drink, and then turns to walk away.

Masterson's eyes switch from being riveted to her cleavage, when she’d bent down to serve the drinks, to the soft tissue activity in her bottom as she leaves the area.
He knows he should pay attention to Thomson and not be focused on the cheeks that launched a thousand ships.  


Masterson says, “Definitely; what man wouldn't be? All right, now that my libido has finished its run in orbit and made a soft landing, let's get down to business…if I can concentrate.” 


 
***

Sometimes a man looks at the face of an exceptionally beautiful woman and all thought processes end up in gridlock.

It’s not aesthetic.
It’s not erotic.
The only tool of his five senses responding to commands are his eyes.
He just...looks. 


***

Mel’s 22nd birthday, he’s a changed man.

His memory is gone.
Scorpion venom, months of drowning in Asian herb therapy and a voltage tsunami have mutated his metabolism and genetic structure.
The face in the mirror says to him. “Get out of here. You’re a walking freak show.”

Ponce De Leon couldn’t find it.
Mel Stone didn’t look for the Fountain of Youth.
It had found him.  
***

The fly finds refuge on a long finger in El Greco’s Via Crucis masterpiece; one of many in the Frank Lloyd Wright emulation home of Drug Lord, Pedro Ramirez.

It feels safer there.
Ready to move.
There’s a Shock and Awe version of Daddy Spank at the other end of the room.
Ramirez glares through spastic eyelids at his son, Cesar. 

***

A heavy, pulsating beat.

Strobe lights like fireflies on a nude girl as she flies around a pole.
Miss No-Bra puts her hands on his thigh as she rubs her breast against an apple-cheeked sailor’s shoulder at the bar. 
She moves a drink over to him.
Miss Glory enters the stage tossing her breasts around like a windsock at the airport to the cheers of the biker types and geezers.

The watering hole of the higher life forms of La La Land? 

***

Mel, in one of Mark’s old T-shirts looks as if he can barely breathe.

Alexis swallows in shame at the level her brain’s infidelity is controlling her pulse rate—in addition to what’s happening down below.
Her face grabs a shade of pink, as she stares at a Bowflex trained block of granite.

Boy toy time?

Wednesday, June 19, 2013

HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE?

How many centuries did it take for Conservative thinking to accept the fact that the Earth is round?
How many centuries will it take for Conservative thinking to accept the scientific evidence of evolution?
How many centuries will it take for Conservative thinking to accept the almost universal scientific evidence of man impacted global warming?
How many centuries did it take for Conservative thinking to accept the fact that slavery is against their religion?
How many centuries did it take for Conservative thinking to accept women’s right to vote?
How many decades will it take for Conservative thinking to accept Social Security and Medicare, both applicable to the Constitution’s Preamble and Section 8 provisions,  “Congress shall provide for the General Welfare”?
How many decades did it take for Conservative thinking to accept the concept of a minimum wage?
How many decades did it take for Conservative thinking to accept the concept of child labor laws?
How many decades will it take for Conservative thinking to accept the concept that inter-racial marriage is not the end of the world?
How many decades will it take for Conservative thinking to accept the concept that same sex marriage follows the Constitution in establishing that all Americans are born with equal rights.
How many decades will it take for Conservative thinking to accept historical evidence that the “Trickle Down Theory” is, as the 41st President of the United States described it, “Voodoo Economics”. It does not work for anyone except the top 1%.
How many decades will it take for Conservative thinking to realize that the demographics of the United States has changed?

AUDIO BOOKS

Audiobooks are now up to 5% of the market.  They are the fastest rising part of the book market in the United States.
GETTING STARTED WITH AUDIO BOOKS
PREREQUISITE:   Your book must be listed on Amazon
BENEFITS:           There are NO FEES if you select a 50% share of potential royalties          
 Follow these steps:
1. Go to www.acx.com.
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 2. Click “Join” on the top-left and follow the steps to create an account.
  3. Click on “Add Your Title” on the top-right, search for your title, and then select “This Is My Book”. (please note that in order for your book to appear here, it must be available on Amazon as either an ebook, paperback, or hardcover)
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4. Choose whether you want to narrate the audiobook yourself or look for a narrator.
5. If you chose to upload it yourself, please go to the “In Production” tab and upload the audiobook. If you are looking for a narrator, continue to step 6.
6. You can either search for a narrator by going to “Search” on the top-right or wait for narrators to contact you to audition for your book.
 7. Once you found the best narrator, you can send them an offer and then begin production. The producer is responsible for producing and uploading the audiobook.
 8. It pays to have the narrator of your book audition the first few pages or a chapter.  In the audition for my book, the narrator needed correction on the accent of two characters and the pronunciation of the names of others.
The three narrators I’ve worked with so far are excellent and willingly accept suggestions for improvement. 
9. Once the final audio is uploaded, you can either approve it or request changes from them. Once it’s approved, it will come to us for our QA process and then go up for sale on Audible, Amazon, and iTunes in about 3-4 weeks.
To get a better understanding of how ACX works, please visithttp://www.acx.com/help/how-it-works/200484210

Monday, June 17, 2013


ANNOUNCEMENT
With the completion of Hell’s Vengeance, the last of the series , The Hell Trilogy. M and B Music  announces the posting of its complete book product line on Amazon, Google Books and Barnes and Noble:

Additionally, Predators in the WorkplaceThe Drone Incident  and Dante's Eternity are in audiobook 

For descriptions, see http://mandbmusic.com


The Words of Robert Kennedy


Robert Kennedy was once asked what he would do if he were President.

He replied, “First, I would ask the heads of the three major networks to produce as rapidly as possible – and run in prime time – a two hour documentary showing what it was like to live in a ghetto.

Let them show the sound, the feel, the hopelessness, and what its like to think you’ll never get out.

 Show the black teenager, told by some radio jingle to stay in school, looking at his older brother – who stayed in school – and who’s out of a job.

Show the Mafia pushing narcotics, put a Candid Camera in a ghetto school and what a rotten system of education it really is.

Film a mother staying up all night keep the rats from her baby…Then I’d ask people to watch it – and experience what it means to live in the most affluent society in history – without hope.” 

Friday, September 28, 2012

UNIQUE WRITING STYLE





I just finished my second read of Don Winslow’s The Kings of Cool.

My first read was just three months ago. 

I had to read it again.

The Kings of Cool is the prequel to his terrific novel Savages. It impressed Oliver Stone so much he made it into a movie.

No writer has influenced me on how to tell a story like Winslow. He unleashed something, and story telling became fun–more so for me–than for “atta boys” and book sales.

Someone wrote, “The joy of writing is a gift.”
I believe that.

Winslow keeps pushing the envelope to break new ground, and “go where no man has gone before”.

A two word chapter?

He reaches for the edge by often ignoring journalism class instruction and the Chicago Manual of Style.

 Is he wrong?

SURPRISE: Publishers like Simon and Schuster just keep raking in the $$$, waiting for more screen rights to bear fruit, like another picking up the Scorcese and DeNiro option on The Winter of Frankie Machine. What about Warner Bros acquiring Satori for Leonardo DiCaprio?

Where do Winslow’s ideas come from?

Roswell?

They’re analogous to Neil Diamond’s song structures, lyrics, and titles that seem to have come from “somewhere else”. For example:

Cracklin’ Rosie
Huh?

I Am, I Said
Huh?

Winslow comes up with other universe metaphors that get you nodding, and then shaking your head all the while chuckling at his creativity–and his testosterone.

He frequently uses abbreviations, OGR (Old Guys Rule) and characters with “different” names like Chon and Hang Ten, girls named O and Sunny Day–all with geneology resembling the wiring configuration in the back of my computer desk. Somehow, they all flow together.

It is a radical departure from his early Neil Carey Private Investigator writings.

Where did his epiphany come from?

In his time, Hemingway was a style departure from standard prose.
He laid a groundwork that evolved to the similar “teletype” writing style of James Elroy (Black Dahlia, L.A. Confidential) and others.

Winslow is an heir to that style.

He has a NASA approach to conventional writing, in essence, asking the world of “by the book" writers, “Why leave it Earthbound?”

Last year I discovered him by reading California Fire and Life.
It was described as a classic in one recent Amazon review of The Kings of Cool.

 After a few chapters of “Wow”, I stopped reading, went to my computer and suddenly words and phrases blistered my keyboard.

After I finished California Fire and Life, I bought and read every one his books, The Dawn Patrol, The Power of the Dog, Savages, Gentlemen’s Hour and others.

Winslow’s story telling was once described by a literary critic as him sitting at a bar with friends telling them what happened.

Will he ever be classified as a great master or be a reading assignment in a journalism class?

No.
Is he interesting and fun to read?

You betcha.

The man has stolen my fascination with Nelson DeMille. Tom Clancy, and Robert Ludlum. I still buy them and enjoy them, but I keep waiting for more from Don Winslow.

He doesn’t just break the mold. He shatters it and turns it into the Milky Way.